- aris' paragraph is argumentative paragraph, at that time aris little bit confused with his topic and topic sentence of the paragraph but because we disscussed together, finally aris and also ll of us understood the topic and topic sentence of the paragraph. the topic is women and the topic sentence is women join military. we had to focus when we wanted to analyze paragraph. one come I emphasize that we have to consider the whole sentences of the paragraph, not only the first sentence or the last sentence of the paragraph.
- the second presentator was aci, she explained about definition pargraph and that's paragraph was ey clear. good paragraph and god job for aci... ^_^
- hamdy explained about cause and effect paragraph, the first time I didn't agree that it was cause and effect paragraph because the cause event in the paragraph did,t show clearly, but after I read and understand more, I got the point of the paragraph and I change my mind that that's cause effect pargraph.
- ima's pargraph is repor paragraph, even if the first time she decided that her paragraph was argumentative paragraph. argumentative pargraph have to strong position of the writer.
- and the last presenter is kajol or aida. she explained about cause and effect pargraph,and her pargraph was very clear..
I wait for your respond guys...thx...
