Minggu, 16 September 2012

Second Reflection

hemb..still amazing..
exciting class
I have studied about narration paragraph, not only thatI have written the paragraph too
I hope after studying it I could be more understand..
my friends have already explained about descriptive paragraph...
putri told about prosedure text about how to make meatball, that's good...it was very clear.
nita and yogi told about descriptive paragraph, but after identifying together we agreed that tnita's pargraph is illustration pargraph, becausein her paragraph didn't describe clearly about the object, but there were specifik example about the object..yogi's paragraph still Ge-Je,because there were many main ideas in there..but his purpose wanted to explain about description paragraph..but mistakes is the best teacher...I wait for your comment guys..thx

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  1. hy is...from your composition i learn that description paragraph describe clearly about the object, and illustration paragraph always gives specific examples about the object. thanks is, if i have a mistake, please give me the true one, so i can improve it.hehehe.......

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    1. aini....thank you..
      by your writing, I learnt that the topic idea not alwas be written in the first sentence in the paragraph..but we can make new topic sentence which is based on the supporting sentence...

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